Roast my LinkedIn post

📬 The post:

Aspiring Creator
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Why should your comment be a mini-post? Many people scroll past comments, But your comment can stand out! When I started commenting, I just added a short phrase. And the results: No one gave a sh*t about that. But then I made a change and turned my comments into mini-posts. And guess what? ✅My engagement grew ✅People started noticing ✅More people connected with me Now you have to turn it into mini posts. Here how: → Add value to every comment → Tell a short story or example → Share a quit tip or insight → Ask thoughtful questions → Show your expertise Grab opportunities with your comments, As your next client might notice. P.S. How much time do you spend commenting daily?
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🍖 Your roast:

ContentIn
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"How I Boosted My LinkedIn Comments" "Now People Notice My Comments Too!" Discover the secret to engaging comments. Turning basic comments into insightful mini-posts revolutionized my networking: → Offer value; don't just talk. → Share a quick relatable story. → Give a practical tip. → Ask thought-provoking questions. → Show what makes you unique. Capture interest with each comment! Engage and grow your connections: How often are your comments noticed?
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🍖 Your full roast:

Score 8/10: Great hook and clear format, but weak on emotion. Improve with stronger emotional language and avoid repetition.

Overall Score: 8/10

Positive Points:

  • The hook is engaging: "Why should your comment be a mini-post?"
  • The rehook makes the reader more interested and it's brief
  • The post uses the "How to" format for engagement
  • Easy to read and well-spaced format
  • The post includes a list with actionable items
  • Strong wording usage in certain sections showcases strength
  • The post includes a call to action question at the end

Negative Points:

  • The post does not convey strong emotion
  • Could use stronger and clearer emotional conveyance
  • Some lines with slightly repetitive ideas

Suggestions for Improvement:

  1. Enhance Emotional Impact:
    Infuse more emotion or reveal a personal anecdote to deepen engagement.
  2. Greater Linguistic Diversity:
    Avoid repetitive sentiments or phrases to retain reader interest.
  3. Strengthen Emotional Verbs:
    Use emotionally-driven verbs to bolster connection, e.g., 'empower', 'ignite'.

👉 By targeting these areas, you could see increased engagement and more compelling LinkedIn posts.

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