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The Real Secret to Building Great Companies? It’s Not What You Think. Everyone tells you to focus on execution, hustle, and grinding it out. But here’s the truth: Great companies are built on Great Insights. (And the fastest-growing ones? They ride emerging trends.) To build something truly amazing, you have to know what others don’t know yet. Mike Maples (Forbes Top Tech Investor) discovered this early on. After 3 years of research, he created a framework for spotting the Breakthroughs a Startup Must Achieve: 1️⃣ Breakthrough Insights: Synthesizing unique data points. 2️⃣ Breakthrough Value Proposition: Offering value that’s unmatched. 3️⃣ Breakthrough Predictable Growth Strategy: Scaling with precision. 💡 Want to stand out? It’s simple: Learn to live in the future before anyone else gets there. P.S. What’s one insight that helped you spot a winning trend?
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🍖 Your roast:

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How I Built 3 Companies Using Only a List. Why Hustle Alone Won’t Guarantee Success. Discover the untold secrets behind rapid business growth. Focus not just on execution, but on insights that break the mold. Recognizing emerging patterns is key to creating sustained growth. Mike Maples, a distinguished tech investor, figured it out by mastering three crucial breakthroughs: - Unmatched Insights: Combining unique observations. - Distinct Value: Creating what others can't. - Predictable Growth: Knowing exactly how to scale. Harness insights before trends set in and stand out from the crowd. Which insight has been your game changer? Share below!
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🍖 Your full roast:

Engaging hook and formatting, but lacks emotional depth and slightly overlength. Condense, integrate personal stories, and use viral hook formats.

Overall Score: 7/10

Positive Points:

  • The hook is engaging and scroll-stopping: "The Real Secret to Building Great Companies? It’s Not What You Think."
  • The rehook effectively follows up on the hook by challenging common perceptions about building companies.
  • The post is formatted for easy reading with clear breaks and a list.
  • There's a list which makes the content digestible.
  • It ends with a thought-provoking call to action: "What’s one insight that helped you spot a winning trend?"

Negative Points:

  • The post is longer than 750 characters, slightly exceeding an ideal length.
  • While the content is informative, it isn't particularly emotional or strongly worded.
  • There's limited use of common viral post templates like “How I” or “How to” at the start.

Suggestions for Improvement:

  1. Create Emotional Resonance:
    Integrate personal stories or vivid examples to make the content resonate on an emotional level.
  2. Condense Content:
    Try to condense the information to stay within 750 characters to make it more snappy and potent.
  3. Optimize Hook Structure:
    Start with a personal story or direct approach in the hook to align with viral post templates by using phrases like “How I…”

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